fucking A-death tribe is a fucking epic track! Now I'm gonna bust your balls-You need a bass player-even if buried in mix. Second, for vocals you need to put a compressor in the vocal electric chain so you don't blow your voice out everytime you play the song live. You have about 3 performances in you before you screw up your vocal chords unless you do otherwise.
to conclude-professional drums, epic guitars-cool lyrics and great vocalizations-fucking A stay metal