"Well done! That is all I can say, the most amazing story here! You really should be proud of this, no joke. Hopefully, in the future it will be published and on the shelves and I assure you I will be one of the first to buy it. Again, well done, this gift is amazing.”
-dottiestgirl@hotmail.co.uk
“When I started reading it I couldn't stop! I was up until 2:30 this morning reading the entire thing in one sitting. That is VERY unusual for me considering I HATE reading! It is a great story.”
-monkeygirl9599@yahoo.com
“Oh my god, this story is amazing. I love how you are writing it also. Good job. This story it makes it seem more real, like almost everyone has had a friend or someone that this happened to. But it is really good! I love it.”
-rainbowbrite52791@yahoo.com
"I've truly enjoyed this story thus far because it is a realistic portrayal of two scared kids about to become parents. I love that Adrienne is insecure and struggles with whether or not she's annoying Johnny as much as she struggles with the fact that she's pregnant. It was refreshing to come across a story where the characters actually act their age and you did a fantastic job developing strong characters. I was also exstatic that this isn't really a romance. It's not a story about Johnny and Adrienne falling in love because they have to for their baby. They're trying to deal with each other because they are having a baby."
-musicfreak153@mac.com
“I loved this story and sat reading it for seven hours reading it.”
-twirlgrl69@yahoo.com
"This is the greatest! I hate being repetitive but it really is.I LOVE this story, it's like a movie except it seems REAL. I love your writing technique, and the way Adrienne is slowly but surely 'growing up' in a sense, that's my explanation out of lack of words, I mean that she is sort of becoming a mother, and Johnny and her are getting way closer. I just wanted to let you know how great I think this story is!"
-ashlyn_marie2011@yahoo.com
“I love this story!! I can relate to Adrienne in a way 'cause I'm 14 too!”
-futurequeen2@yahoo.com
“All I can say about this story is, WOW!! I'm not the type to sit on the computer just to read a story all day. However, I stayed on my computer ALL day and read until my sister wanted on, so then I printed the rest and stayed up to finish reading it. I just couldn't get away from it. This story is so addictive and I love the characters. I like the fact that Adrienne seems a bit annoying at times, it makes her more real. I just have nothing bad to say about this story. It's absolutely amazing.”
-irisheyes22790@aol.com
"This story really put me into a different reality, your characters feel so real, and their world is so absorbing. I love how every character, in the end, is very human. Heather, instead of being the evil older sister, is just the insecure girl, and I love that. I earnestly hope that you get published. Believe me, I'd(try to)be the first to buy your books."
-bishie.love@yahoo.com
"Hey, there!
First off, GREAT STORY. Awesome, really, I mean it. I love how it's not at all cliche. It's fantastically original. And oh so truthful... I really like it. Am-AZE-ing! Truly stunning!"
-flipping_spacecraft@yahoo.com
“Oh my gosh!! I am in LOVE with this story! Its so suspenseful! I read the 27 chapters back to back! This is my favorite story, even out of published ones!”
-countrycitygirl9@comcast.net
“I fell in love with the characters and Johnny. I read the majority of your story in one day!”
-candikisses0784@hotmail.com
“I love this story and you are an amazing author. The story flows really well and unlike other stories it's not unbelievable stuff where they talk about things that would cause me to go ‘I would never say that’ and you keep all the facts straight. Thank-you I am so addicted”
-http://www.myspace.com/thatshott1234
"That was great!! So sweet! I started readind at 2pm and its now 10pm and I just couldnt stop!!"
-valentina_akilina@hotmail.com
"I have to tell you that If this were published, I would buy it. It is one of the most amazing stories I have read."
-losal.jordankids@aol.com
“I AM IN LOVE WITH YOU FOR MAKING THIS STORY!!”
-http://www.myspace.com/nia4eva
“I really love your story, when I began to read, and I will tell you, this story is great. I know this might not mean much to you, me writing this. But you writing of this story means millions to me.
God Bless You! From a person who knows.”
-mione_granger_777@yahoo.com
"I'm enjoying the story... if I wasn't I wouldn't still be reading at 4am..."
-disenchanted.quill@gmail.com
"This story is awesome! it's so touching ...really. wow."
-http://www.freewebs.com/xomissericaxo/
"I read the entire thing over again and finished it earlier today (I even got my sister hooked).
It's a really great story, and I think that you've done a good job with it.
As for your characters, I love them! Even the evil ones, because we all love to hate evil people. Jillian is my favorite. She's like the comedic relief, but I like how your characters do have underlining traumas and feelings and aren't all happy sunshine at all times."
-http://imachristian91.livejournal.com/
"Oh my god.. I love it!! Its that best story I've read in a long time!"
-best_buddies31@hotmail.com
"WOW! I love this story. The last week I was sick, and I was reading it the whole day! I loved it! Your characters are written really well, and your story line is great!"
-chain.of.memories.xox@gmail.com
"This is a very good story, very realistic with excellent character development. "
-moremi2000@yahoo.com
"This is a amazing story, i read it in one sitting. You have a real love for your characters and that shows in the writing. For a 14 year old adrienne is a very strong and opinionated girl and johnny is a very mature 17 year old, thanx for the great read."
-kendyl_15@hotmail.com
"Wow, this is my favorite story, even out of published ones!"
-countrycitygirl9@comcast.net
"I love this story so much you are an awesome awesome writer!"
-MercatorTears09@aol.com
"I LOVE this story so much. The characters are realistic, the plot is so true, but yet it doesn't sound cliched. I don't know. It's just very very well written."
-lovenotluv_xo@hotmail.com
"Wow i read the whole story in like two days and it's absolutely extraordinary! I am really in love with it."
-Dark_Minty_Godess@yahoo.com
"Oh, I love this. It's so much like reality."
-monchhichislover@yahoo.com
"It's actually very, very realistic in many ways, including Johnny's characterization. Not all teen guys are jerks, and stranger things have happened. Also, Addrienne's character is sort of heartbreaking in its authenticity - in other words, you've done an EXCELLENT job with this "reality" aspect. Overall, I think you've done a commendable job."
-dreamchild88@msn.com
"I ABSOLUTELY love this story. It's so great, and the way you right it makes it feel so real. I'm used to other 'whoops, I'm pregnant' stories following a certain pattern, and yours doesn't. I like that. Like I said, love it."
-goddessrae2002@yahoo.com
"I love your story! It really is very realistic!
GREAT STORY!"
-http://www.myspace.com/shy_moonlight
